Thursday, May 3, 2018

talking river

at dawn
sun's kissing the silky sky
the road spins

 the isles enchanted by
an azure river's spell


*Image Source: CCO Creative Commons

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4 comments:

  1. Could sit and listen and hear the speak.

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  2. I love the movement in 'the road spins' and the way your tanka ends with 'an azure river's spell'. Enchanting!

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  3. Listening to the river's words ... thank you for this beauty.

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