Wednesday, March 28, 2018

...its lips give to drink...


Life fragments
scattered in pain
through the chambers
heart purifying love
a ripple: is that a risk or a chance?


*Title - fragment from the poem by Rumi, the painting - a fragment of youth exhibition 

 Read more at CARPE DIEM HAIKU, 'THe Beauty of  The Heart'
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7 comments:

  1. Kim M. RussellMarch 29, 2018 at 1:56 AM

    I love the image of fragments scattered through the chambers of the heart - you've captured a break in the heart's rhythm - and the question is perfect.

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  2. Pat HattMarch 29, 2018 at 4:33 AM

    Could be both, but have to take it if you want the reward

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  3. Anthony DuceMarch 29, 2018 at 8:51 AM

    Risk and chance go together.. Enjoyed.

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  4. ChèvrefeuilleApril 1, 2018 at 2:59 PM

    Beautiful tanka ...

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  5. humbirdApril 2, 2018 at 9:34 PM

    Thank you so much everyone! Kristjaan, grateful for inspiration!

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  6. 21 WitsApril 3, 2018 at 10:19 AM

    Always take a chance on love it's the risk we must endure, while hoping for the best!

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    1. humbirdApril 3, 2018 at 8:25 PM

      these are really precious words, dear Karen...

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