Friday, October 6, 2017

reflection


reflection



the fall
not a failure
but  a phantom

a wide gesture to embrace
the last year’ untold story



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13 comments:

  1. WordsPoeticallyWorthOctober 6, 2017 at 4:49 AM

    I enjoyed reading. Well done.

    Thank you. Love love, Andrew. Bye.

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  2. Pat HattOctober 6, 2017 at 5:30 AM

    Still stories to tell no matter the season that shall dwell

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  3. Anthony DuceOctober 6, 2017 at 12:59 PM

    Enjoyed.

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  4. ChèvrefeuilleOctober 6, 2017 at 3:56 PM

    Untold stories will be out in the open ... autumn shows us reality.

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  5. Pat ROctober 7, 2017 at 9:31 AM

    Yes indeed! And so it goes:)

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  6. purplepeninportland.comOctober 10, 2017 at 7:12 PM

    Lovely take on this prompt!

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  7. MarjaOctober 11, 2017 at 10:36 PM

    Good one!

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  8. Sarah RussellOctober 11, 2017 at 10:44 PM

    "...not a failure but a phantom...". Perfect!

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  9. SusanOctober 12, 2017 at 4:10 AM

    ooooo! The fall/reflection/phantom ~ embrace! I embrace this poem as thoroughly.

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  10. Gillena CoxOctober 12, 2017 at 8:57 AM

    Very nice

    much love...

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  11. Sherry Blue SkyOctober 12, 2017 at 1:41 PM

    Wonderful. I love fall with all its golden beauty. Its dying leaves birth springtime's seeds.

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  12. Magical Mystical TeacherOctober 12, 2017 at 2:34 PM

    There are so many untold stories in the world! Who will seek them out and tell them?

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  13. Nicholas October 12, 2017 at 5:46 PM

    the fall/ not a failure/ but a phantom...

    how intriguing. I love the mystery in this line. so deep and thoughtful.

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