Friday, September 8, 2017

three raindrops


Three raindrops
a greeting card from heaven....
midsummer heat
                                                                             © Issa

red-hot asphalt -
sizzling fry thoughts
                   © Humbird

flying away
following the rainbow
into heaven
                                         © Chèvrefeuille

open for new beginnings
and ascending stars
                                        © Humbird



*Image source: CCO Creative Commons

Read more at CARPE DIEM's Tan Renga Challenge weekend meditation #1 raindrops

Shared with PU Poetry Pantry

25 comments:

  1. You bring such meaning to life with each line!

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  2. Just what one needs to see sometimes as they drop away.

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  3. Very impressive. I got a feeling of connection, back to the beginning.

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  4. refresing rain drops.. well written

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  5. I love the greeting card from heaven and the ascending stars. Lovely images.

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  6. Love how you connected the Issa with something really contemporary... some things change, but some things don't

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  7. What a wonderful inventive poem....

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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  8. Enjoyed these....especially the idea of following the rainbow into heaven!

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  9. The synergy is these pieces is rather mesmerizing. A fascinating collaboration!

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  10. Both Tan Renga are nicely completed. I especially love that second Tan Renga ... very spiritual choice to make that first stanza complete.

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    1. Thank you very much for all inspiration I feel from the distance, dear Kristjaan! Blessed day!

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  11. Well rain is always appreciated here in Australia like any greeting card.

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  12. The collaboration is perfect humbird! One is privileged to be part of it

    Hank

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  13. Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous!!❤️

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  14. Nice ... Both Tan Renga are gorgeous and therein I sense a deeper hidden meaning. Well done.

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  15. Thank you so much! I'm grateful for all your comments, dear friends! Blessings!

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  16. Love this heavenly bits, especially the first... The power of the imagery kisses skin and dances into the bones. Just lovely.

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  17. Issa surely is smiling at your renga with a shift in your completion just like he loved to surprise us; you add such hope to our host's hokku...beautiful. Reading it made me smile.

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