Friday, November 14, 2014

Knots

Choker by I. Golembo

                     
                      "Find a break in the meshes of the net
                        that tightens around us,leap out, flee!
                                                                        E. Montale

Souls sealed in
a snow membrane,
accepted will
stretching the brain,
loosened loops
torn apart
unclaimed patterns
chaotic art.

Worlds are entangled into
electromagnetic waves.
Layers of Thoughts –
vibrant  emotions recharged…

I used to tied the tight head knot,
Now – no strings attached.



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24 comments:

  1. Ah.. still that tension between the image and the words at the end.. to carefully create with rope...

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  2. So easily all becomes tangled. Enjoyed very much.

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  3. Very cool, to use that as a metaphor. Nicely done.

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    1. Loops and knots - what we meet among the life. ~ Thanks for challenge, Victoria!

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  4. that is a cool metaphor... sometimes things are just so tangled and knotted... i don't mind if a little bit chaotic though... smiles

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    1. We can alway loosen them slightly...~ Thanks!

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  5. no strings attached... except those that by love bind us

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    1. those by love don't feel like strings I guess...

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  6. Things can become tangled in the web we weave, but sometimes have to get the scissors and cut them loose

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  7. This is very clever - love those closing lines!

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    1. Yeap, no more tying knots...Thank you, Sherry!

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  8. Knots, as well as beading are great symbols of life as we weave our way through and must go through so many hoops in our lives...clever poem

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    1. Sometimes too many knots stop us from moving through life... ~ Thank you very much, Kathy!

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  9. It's a perfect ending! Only way to be!

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  10. Love how you end with no strings attached.

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  11. The last two lines are absolutely brilliant..such intelligent writing with so many layers of meaning!

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